Friday, April 1, 2011

It isnt smooth ,but  it isnt tough either ...
you can hurt me, but you cant break me...


the more it gets harder ...
the more it makes me stronger ...


i will not perish , for i am here to survive ...
i will not vanquish , for i am here to fight...


i will fall, but that wont halt my way to the sky....
i will fail  , but that wont deter my spirits to try...


i am my strength,and i am my inspiration...
its me i believe ...i need no commiseration...


walk along with me ..and hold me when i stumble...
but dont decide my path...for i will have my own experiences even if i crumble....

appreciate me for me...for this is what i am ...
if i change ..i wont love..i wont fight ...i wont dream..i wont try ....

if i loose me.. i loose u ...
coz  i am me ...i am capable of  ..loving you
coz i am me i am capable of appreciatieng you ....
coz i am me i am with you ...

9 comments:

  1. I already told u dat i appreciate ur writing skills!

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  2. The post is inspiring! I like the force of the determination to shape the course of life.

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  3. I like the strength and determination you express in this poem!

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  4. Thanks mary, keep reading my blog its really encouraging :)

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  5. Great rhymes, and a great ending, keep up the good writing! :)

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