Thursday, September 11, 2014

Just humans !

Sometimes I wonder, 
May be, the world would have been a better place if we were all 
Just humans

Not a man, nor a woman
Just humans

Not Hindus, neither Muslims nor Christians
Just humans

Not White, not Blacks, not Americans, not Asians
Just Humans

Mother Nature's beautiful creation,
Just humans


15 comments:

  1. ..i wish we could be humans..n behave like humans..but the irony is that we are everything..but humans..
    ..loved your poem..keep writing.. :)

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    1. Thanks a lot rigzin, thats so true we are everything but humans!

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  2. "Mother Nature's beautiful creation "...yeah we are potentially divine and it's very sad how we have dehumanized ourselves. ...nice reminders :)

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  3. You have made an excellent point. If we would concentrate on everyone's SAMENESS instead of concentrating on differences, a more tolerant and livable world we would live in.

    Thanks for taking part in Poetry Pantry, Surabhi.

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    1. Thanks for providing a platform like poetry pantry Mary :) and thanks again for reading

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  4. Why in the world are we left to wonder if we could be just humans!! Nicely penned, Surabhi. :)

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    1. its sad that we have come to a point where we have to wonder if we could just be humans :(
      thanks vineeta for reading :)

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  5. Ya... Then it will be better place to live in.. :) Like the poem..:)

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    1. Hope we realize it soon. Tx for reading jeyanthi :)

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  6. We are indeed more similar than different but sadly we seem to notice the differences more than the similarities.

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